Tammera Farell
Saturday, August 6, 2011
Can you criticize my book beginning?
thats absolutley amazing. i have one question though. the narrator says they don't fully understand the human's body temperature, but seems to be human. is that explained later? i'm just saying, it will confuse people who read this.
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